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My long ride # 1
Me and my freinds where coming home from a party it was dark. We where all going out to eat at the diner as we where driving though the country roud having a great time listing to some music we heard a important inouncement on the radio. At first we didnt think much of it at the timejust another thunder storm warning or a old weather report. But this wasnt a weather report a very dangrous criminal had escaped from the West Water police department and we armed. We all had no idea that this was going to be the longest night of our lifes. we reached the diner but starngly they where closed that was starnge they never close early i turned my back to the diner going back to the car. Thats when it all began a strong man ponted a gun at my head saying get in the car. Me and my freinds where terrorfied there was no doubt in my mind i was a gonner.
To be continued 
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05-17-2007, 02:18 AM
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way to keep the reader interested by leaving a cliff hanger--cant wait till the next exciting installment--keep up the good stories
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