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Long Ride # 3
I saw the way the convicts dark eyes peered over the side of the car. his head ducked down. I knew he might do somthing awfull. Just then a i saw the owner pick up the phone to call the police. The convict sreamed drive! I drove off thinking he was about to kill me i could identify him. We drove and drove fianlly he told me to stop at a old abandoned shack in the middle of the trees. "A perfect place to hide come o". What i asked why do you need us. He looked back at me and said you dont know why i was in jail do you. no i said. "I was inocent they thoght i had killed three men i didnt do it i was framed". "By who" i asked. He who should not be named he would kill me. He said if i didnt confess he would kill me. I started to think this man want so dangreous maybe he was telling the truth. My freinds who had not spocken a word the whole time walked behind me. We reached the shack he told me he could not stay there for long he had to run. From who the police have no idea where you are. " He should not be named is looking for me thats why i escaped hes trying to killme". "But why i asked You didnt tell". He then told me he told the gurads he was inocent. Now the strange man was looking for him.
To be continued 
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05-18-2007, 02:41 PM
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keep it up--your a great story writer--cant wait till the next part
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