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Old 07-29-2007, 08:22 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Final Fight?

I stand there facing him, not believing that it came down to this. But one thing we both knew was this is the final fight for someone. And both of us thought it was the other. As I draw my weapon all he does is show fangs. The Referee drops the simple words "Fight To The Death." After that all goes, every man for himself. I look in his eyes and I see determanation to stop me. I feel the tension between us, almost feeling his thoughts. Then I made a simple mistake that may have cost me my life.

I lurch forward screaming "Your Life Ends Here." He simply sidesteps and i fly to the outside of the ring. I hear footsteps turn to nothing as he simply goes to his stomach and starts sliding towards me. I turn around and block his path simply by ripping up a loose piece of ground. I start running hearing his footsteps get closer and closer. I look over to my hand and i see that my weapon is gone, now i am weaponless running for my life.

I go to the nearest wall and try to climb it but i feel somthing pierce my leg. I look down it was my own weapon. I hear the crowd cheer him on, I feel blood draining from my leg and myself passing out. I slowly fall to the ground awaiting my death, looking around.

At first I couldnt believe my ears. The crowd was actually booing him. I look around wondering if it was only a dream. But sadly it wasnt-blood was draining from my leg and my master had the satisfied look on his face. I look to my left and see my weapon with part of my skin on it, then i look too my leg and notice that its completly healed. Then is the sight i thought id never see. It was my best friends body, thats what satisfied my master. I couldnt believe this, and i know i didnt do it. So my first reaction was run...and i go with that.

I hear his footsteps closing in and he finally catches up. He could see that i was going through hell now that he killed him. I asked whyd you do that, he simply replied..he told me too. Knowing that that was completly true..i continue running wondering...whats gonna happen next.

I dont believe im saying this..but maybe i shouldve let my friend die, not only did it ruin my life and turn me into what i am now. But it turned my best friend against me. Just when i thought it couldnt get any worse i heard a recognizable voice "Hello Darren"

To be continued...........
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Old 07-29-2007, 08:49 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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wow, quite an intriguing story. really love it so far!
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Old 08-08-2007, 07:47 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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good story cena
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Old 08-13-2007, 11:37 AM     #4 (permalink)
 
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wow again cena nice work
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wow cool 1 cena keep up the good work
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Old 08-14-2007, 03:47 AM     #6 (permalink)
 
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WOW! Can't wait for the next instalment Cena!
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Old 11-09-2007, 02:37 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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coolis your name darren?(i know it not hehe)
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Old 11-10-2007, 10:35 AM     #8 (permalink)
 
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