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Old 04-25-2007, 01:02 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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a cruel end

while he feels a sharp pain in his arm and a rushing warmth his vains he knows the end is near. life was cruel he thought as he sat there trying to keep back the tears swelling in his eyes, what did i do to deserve this? why me? he looked around the last room he will ever be inside, put his head in his hand and prayed to God to keep his mother,father and friends safe and that they dont meet an end so cruel as what is happening to him. why did i waste my life? He thought as he fell into a sleep he will never wake up from.
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Old 04-25-2007, 01:52 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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awesome!!! i love it keep d good work
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Old 04-25-2007, 01:54 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Old 04-25-2007, 03:12 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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Old 04-25-2007, 03:14 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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What was the pain in his arm and where was his gorgeous auntie?
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Old 04-25-2007, 03:54 PM     #6 (permalink)
 
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i helped him with 1 line!!!!!they had already killed the bunny
the pain was an injection(kinda like puttin dogs down!)
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Old 04-25-2007, 03:57 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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i didnt mean to write this thing(im not trying to spam)

Last edited by Mrteabag; 04-25-2007 at 03:59 PM. Reason: BIG MISTAKE(SORRY)
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Old 05-03-2007, 05:04 PM     #8 (permalink)
 
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very sad but good.
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Old 05-24-2007, 11:35 AM     #9 (permalink)
 
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Old 05-24-2007, 09:31 PM     #10 (permalink)
 
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nice story keep it up
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