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Old 05-12-2007, 06:59 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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ANOTHER CRUEL END

the crowd jeered, booed and threw anything possible. the fear inside makes me want to get sick. why? oh why lord did this happen to me? as a stale piece of bread hit my face and the crowed cheered in delight. the pain in his neck was getting worse because the noose was tightening. the crowd screamed kill him, kill him and threw more rocks at me. Just then i saw my mother crying at the back of the crowd, this isnt the first time this happened to her i thought, her father was hanged too. The hangman put a bag over my head and the crowd screamed even louder than before. i felt the floor falling from underneath me and that was the end.
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Kieran!! Im going to have to have a serious chat with your mother about what she's letting you watch on the tv!!
 
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