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A German tries to make a songtext 1
10-07-2007, 06:15 PM
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A German tries to make a songtext 1
I am a German musician
and I try to write songtexts in English, but I am a little bit unsafe
, if the words are right. If you find a mistake in spelling, grammar or comprehension, please feel free to correct my text 
If someone has correct my songtext I will place it with piano and voice on youtube 
Song 1
Turn in something
I an old house
There was standing a girl
here name was secret and
dust around her.
Love the music
Love to dance
Lost in anger
Lost in fear
Dance little girl
like you want
the night is here
the audience waits
noone can stop you now
you turn in turn in
something great
In a calm place
there was sitting a girl
writes a letter and
don`t send him up.
Love the lyrics
love the poem
lost in words
lost in poetry.
Write little girl
what you want
the night is here
the audience waits
noone can stop you now
you turn in turn in
something great.
Song 2
If he doesn`t...
If he doesn`t know me
If he doesn`t fade to grey
will love him tonight
Do you see my thoughts fly
Do you see me scream and cry
will tell you my life.
Every Day in past
there was a man
inside my head
never able
to ignore the way
he planned for me
He was dominant and pure
I loved him for sure.
Devotion Servility
God wants.
Please don`t leave me I need you
Hope you grow for something real.
If you understand me
If you ever feel the same
think about the words.
AnnieOne ~~(,, ,,°>
07-02-2008, 01:46 PM
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Posts: 4,858
Join Date: Apr 2008Age: 45
Cool, my great grandparents came from germany! It's so great, to see so many german people here! I think your songs are great, keep going!__________________
Let the love in your heart, guide you through
the perilous times,and let your soul partake of it's joy. Always knowing, you gave without regreting,for it is the reason for being !
