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Old 06-03-2008, 12:46 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Waves

This is my first poem! Hope you like it.




A bright morning sit at the sea shore


everything so peaceful and still.


Nothing but the sound of crashing waves


and sea birds making their kill.





Children building castles in the golden sand,


t'was a sight to see.


While a group of fishermen with their boats,


set sail in the open sea.





Bouncy youngsters, towards the waves headed;


some amateur fishing, while others took a swim.


Their enthusiasm filled the hearts of others


till the sun set and the light went dim.






All the while, t'was people being observed


and not the waves.


They appear to rise and fall


but never remain the same.




Their rising and falling without a break,


seemed egging on to reach a goal.


Looking up to the stars in the sky


and bowing to the cold princess, the moon.




Waves of thought came to mind.


The waves don't seem to give up.


They definetely are one of a kind.


They rise and fall but again do they get up.






I must say, this isn't my demise


for waves are my inspiration


because they rise and fall


to fall and rise.
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Old 06-03-2008, 01:01 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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That is a wonderful poem!
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this poem is awsome . nice work.
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beautiful hon
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