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Old 10-11-2008, 08:55 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Unknow Future

Ok this is a poem written by my friend to me ,I am not sure what the meaning of it is.Could some one tell me what they think?

I love you so much
I know that the road to the impossible is long
I know your the best woman
And I have no alternitive
I know that the time of love is at an end
And the beautiful talk is dead
So what should I say
For the best woman
I will tell her,I love you so much
I live in exicle
and you live in excile
and between you and me
and wind and rain, thunder and lighting,ans snow and fire will not stop it
To go to your eyes is an Illusion
and to go to you is suicide
But it makes me happy
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Old 10-11-2008, 10:17 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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Sounds to me like he believes he loves you and you love him, but other commitments keep you two from being together.
Good luck with it.
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Old 10-11-2008, 10:24 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Use your heart to translate it, your heart will know.It's a beautiful poem for sure!!!
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Old 10-12-2008, 03:11 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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it looks like he wants you but knows he cant have you so just be carfull hun
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Old 10-13-2008, 06:43 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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its actually quite simple but meaningful..letting u know his feelings but at the same time sticking to reality in which no matter how much he loves u, it seems impossible for u two to be together.but whatever it is..he's happy just to love u..at least thats what i think..
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Old 10-13-2008, 06:47 PM     #6 (permalink)
 
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Thanks i too was trying to figure out waht it was but i guess if i look under the confuseness of it ,it does amke sence
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Old 10-19-2008, 01:02 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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I agree with everyone else. But have to add, sounds like loving you makes him suffer, and he willingly suffers. So sad... beautiful, but sad.
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