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Old 10-14-2006, 11:12 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Try Something New

Try something New
I look in to his eyes
I see the pain inside
I ask him if he's okay
He says he's fine
I don't know if you've noticed
But okay and fine are different things
He knows that inside
He knows we both know that
He looks at me with a look I've never seen before
I look back not sure of what to ecspect next
There is silence
No one says i thing
Finally he says something
"I was just thinking, maybe it's time to try something new"
I look at him confused
"Try something new?" I ask
He says he's sorry and walks away with out another word
I sit there
Thousands of thoughts running through my mind
I grab a knife
I cut in to my arm "TRY SOMETHING NEW"
I hit a vain and it breaks
I lie in my bed
My last thoughs getting harder to think
My last thought-
Try something new.
 
Old 10-15-2006, 12:18 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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it starts out pretty but sad at the end...
But good job!
 
Old 10-16-2006, 05:44 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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