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Tip-Toe Tease
Old 07-11-2007, 04:54 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Tip-Toe Tease

Looking out
Over my edge
Seeing a void
Of unending night
And hearing your voice
Coercing me to jump
Grabbing at my breath
Your spirit rising from the mist

To Jump

Id fall endlessly forever
My screams silenced by your cruel hand
Saying you'll hold me
but letting me go
Laughing as you uncover your wings
Rising above my mountain
Watching as I fall
Mawking me as I reach out in vain

But

To stay here
Tip-toeing my edge
I tease you
Making you believe that falling is my destiny
From here my screams are never silenced
And I will never reach in vain

So

Keep hovering there
Watch me as I conquer
Hold your breath as I become
The one thing you said I'd never be.

BEAUTIFUL.
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Old 07-11-2007, 04:57 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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wow hon!! a great poem! u know im here for u now and always, keep writing, u have a great talent, love ya
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Old 07-12-2007, 12:49 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Very nice poem Nilla! Lot's of meaning and feelings to it, i like it. Keep up the good work.
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Old 07-12-2007, 12:57 AM     #4 (permalink)
 
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go nilla! beautiful poem hun!
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Old 07-12-2007, 11:47 AM     #5 (permalink)
 
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Thanks Guys
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Old 07-12-2007, 01:27 PM     #6 (permalink)
 
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Great one girl!! Keep it up and keep letting things out!!
Reach out for what you need and grasp it tightly!!
You will see it all in the end.....
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Old 07-12-2007, 10:17 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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wow nilla you amaze me about everything you do! keep up the great work
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Old 07-12-2007, 10:34 PM     #8 (permalink)
 
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WOW NILLA U CAPTURED MY ATTINTION
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