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take this pain away
Old 06-02-2008, 11:52 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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take this pain away

this pain, tearing my insides out
unbearable at the moment , fading to a distant scream
then it comes again, ripping through my lower abdomen
like a knife gutting my internal organs
tearing them apart, then fades to to a ripping scream
just let this pain go away, if just for a moment fade away , fade away from me
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Old 06-02-2008, 11:58 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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wow...personally i loved it...but i have an interest in creative people....but dude keep up the good work
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Old 06-03-2008, 09:01 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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very good
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Old 06-04-2008, 01:56 AM     #4 (permalink)
 
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My heart is breaking for you hun, but i know you needed to write it! i think it's great work!
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Old 06-07-2008, 12:15 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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aww such nice poem
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Old 06-08-2008, 01:46 AM     #6 (permalink)
 
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