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Old 09-06-2006, 12:30 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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silent tears are wiped away

last night i had a dream
a dream that seemed so real.
I thought i saw you on bended knees
i thought i heared you saying please.
Please forgive me as i've done wrong
please forgive as it's been long.
Now in the past i've been a swine
but i want to have you
you're mine all mine.
That's where i woke and said for real
only in dreams could it be this way.
I'm sure my time will come for rejection
when all i want is love and affection.
But who can tell me who can explain
the reason why were born to grow
Rich in sorrow strong thorough pain
Life is wiser than we gain.
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Old 09-06-2006, 12:42 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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Excellent!! I love reading these as posted!!
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Old 09-06-2006, 12:56 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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well done red!!!!!!! loved it
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Old 09-07-2006, 09:05 AM     #5 (permalink)
 
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Very beautiful
 
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Brilliant red! Write more!
 
Old 09-08-2006, 07:48 AM     #7 (permalink)
 
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Quote: Originally Posted by curlyred1
last night i had a dream
a dream that seemed so real.
I thought i saw you on bended knees
i thought i heared you saying please.
Please forgive me as i've done wrong
please forgive as it's been long.
Now in the past i've been a swine
but i want to have you
you're mine all mine.
That's where i woke and said for real
only in dreams could it be this way.
I'm sure my time will come for rejection
when all i want is love and affection.
But who can tell me who can explain
the reason why were born to grow
Rich in sorrow strong thorough pain
Life is wiser than we gain.
cool
 
Old 09-08-2006, 07:48 AM     #8 (permalink)
 
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cool

Quote: Originally Posted by curlyred1
last night i had a dream
a dream that seemed so real.
I thought i saw you on bended knees
i thought i heared you saying please.
Please forgive me as i've done wrong
please forgive as it's been long.
Now in the past i've been a swine
but i want to have you
you're mine all mine.
That's where i woke and said for real
only in dreams could it be this way.
I'm sure my time will come for rejection
when all i want is love and affection.
But who can tell me who can explain
the reason why were born to grow
Rich in sorrow strong thorough pain
Life is wiser than we gain.
cool
 
Old 09-09-2006, 11:43 PM     #9 (permalink)
 
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Very! Very! good

long curlyred

Very beautiful also!
 
Old 09-10-2006, 09:39 PM     #10 (permalink)
 
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realy cool
 
 

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