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Old 09-25-2007, 10:14 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Permenance

This is for a dear friend, who lost love and is having to deal with that loss, but still stands strong. I love you girl!

Standing over your permenance
Knowing you will never move again
The stone that now serves as your face
And the cherubs are all that are looking back
So much I left unsaid
Haunting me now
Things I kept hidden from you
Secrets tormenting my soul
You were all my heart could love
My only reason for rising in the morning
The only air I could breathe in
Where was this strength before
When you could have taken me in your arms
And kissed my lips
And tell me you love me back
But in that grave
You will only hear the faint muffles
Of tears steadily flowing
Soft whispers you are unable to understand
Raindrops like rose petals fall gently on my face
And my pain carries me away
Hoping you finally heard
All I could never say
When it was more than this permenance
Coldly staring back.
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Old 09-25-2007, 11:45 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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awww hun great poem
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Old 09-25-2007, 09:46 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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OMG girl i Love it
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Old 09-25-2007, 10:10 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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nice 1 nilla..good to have you back..keep em comin!!
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Old 09-26-2007, 02:49 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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Very Nice Hon!!!
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Old 09-26-2007, 02:54 PM     #6 (permalink)
 
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Old 09-26-2007, 04:38 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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Nice poem Nilla, Keep up the good work!
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Old 09-26-2007, 06:00 PM     #8 (permalink)
 
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