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Old 10-14-2006, 10:09 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Once Again Gone

Once Again Gone
Once there was you
Once there was me
We saw each other at once
But kept our distance
We decided the idea of "Us" was a bad one
So we just stayed friends
Everything suddenly turned crazy
I thought you were going to die
I felt that I was to blame
You said it wasn't my fault
But things soon changed
You returned home
And returned to school
We both agreed we felt like idiots for fighting
Then it happened
You kissed me
Nothing else seemed to exist
There was no more you
There was no more me
Just us
Everything happened too fast
And you're once again gone
Gone from home
Gone from school
But this time never to return
Our love is forever
So I know I'll see you again
But onlu when it's my turn to leave
I'll miss you until then
But for now it's just me
 
Old 10-15-2006, 07:11 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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They're all beautiful unknown. I see your in great pain from this loss and you are doing the right thing. Writing it all down and getting it all out will help you immensely. Keep writing

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Old 10-15-2006, 10:54 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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good job unknown..... Keep it up
 
Old 10-16-2006, 04:45 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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Old 10-16-2006, 08:47 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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i really liked this one...i can relate
 
Old 10-17-2006, 06:24 AM     #6 (permalink)
 
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its because of talent like this i started the poem competition
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Old 10-17-2006, 03:27 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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ur peoms are sooo amazing S.P.! Teach me your ways. (is this some one i know??)
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Old 10-17-2006, 03:48 PM     #8 (permalink)
 
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S.P.?? lol hannagirl, i shall teach u my ways...nah, just playin...i dont have ways...u kno bout much as i do....but thank you...encouragement is much apreciated
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What a beautiful, moving poem. I love it. Thanks for sharing some deep feelings.
 
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thank you...im glad you'd take time to read my stuff...
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