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Old 06-05-2008, 01:48 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Once

You were once the girl of my dreams.
Now you're the girl i dream of.
You once called me a friend.
Now you call me you're boyfriend.
You once took forever to get.
Now you're gonna take forever to lose.

From your laugh,
to your wonderful voice.
Everything is beautiful and perfect about you.
I'm happier then I've ever been now that I got you,
and I'm happier now that I'm not gonna lose you.
Everything is perfect now that I have you after so long.

For Dark_Sarah
whom i loved for the past year and a half, and who made me found out i had enough courage to say it.
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Old 06-05-2008, 01:56 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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Awww that is so cute I love you so much
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Old 06-05-2008, 07:41 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Great poem!
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Old 06-06-2008, 04:22 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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really cute poem!!!
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Old 06-07-2008, 01:35 AM     #5 (permalink)
 
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excellent cenafan excellent poem
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Old 06-09-2008, 03:10 AM     #6 (permalink)
 
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thank you guys. And i couldn't have done it without Sarah. so thank you baby, I love you!
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