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not sure what the name should be
Old 08-28-2007, 09:13 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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not sure what the name should be

Standing there in the
morning dew
With a bubbling friend
beside me too
birds nest in my armes
squarles playing in my hair
looking out into a field of flowers
I see rubys,sadfires,and dimonds
glisting with the morning dew
the sun is climbing in the sky
suddenly angrey clouds take the suns place
they start to stomp around
a blinding light fills the sky
and tears start to fall
at first here and there
then the next you know
you cant see through the tears
the birds are quiet and settling down
my bubbling friend is now a raging lion
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Old 08-30-2007, 11:29 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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wow hun nice poem i didnt see that coming but i loved it
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