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Old 06-24-2008, 09:43 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Mommy's Tears

I can't believe I hurt you,
How I wish that it'd been me.
The silent scream frozen on your face
Is all that I can see.
I cry my eyes blood red,
While you sleep peacefully.
Only another parent can know
how much hurting you is hurting me.
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Old 06-24-2008, 09:47 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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wow that was really good



nice job, and was it based on you and your kid
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Old 06-24-2008, 09:48 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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It's so touching, and so true!
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Old 06-24-2008, 10:09 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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Old 06-24-2008, 10:10 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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Yeah it's about me and my son. Sometimes it seems no matter how super careful you think you are, life has a way of popping up now and then and reminding you to be more careful still. Thank you for the nice words guys.
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Old 06-24-2008, 10:22 PM     #6 (permalink)
 
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Hey, I was an accident so maybe they're not all bad...or
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Old 06-25-2008, 12:17 AM     #7 (permalink)
 
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so much emotion expressed.
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Old 06-25-2008, 01:25 AM     #8 (permalink)
 
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very very nice and ur right sometimes no matter how careful u are ppl still can get hurt
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Old 07-02-2008, 02:44 AM     #9 (permalink)
 
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Good poem Nasshi!
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