tinkerwink

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Her image is burned in the mind forever.
Frozen forced smile upon her cold lips.
Eyes closed to the ones who long to look in.
Hands folded neatly across her chest.
Music lazy in the background does nothing to break her rest.
They move by looking, but not.
Loving, but not sure they did.
Burned forever in their minds,
her cold dead face.

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Nilla

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good job. i liked it

krobelus

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me too,why dont u have a poetry section on the new look cusa,then these great works will have a place of their own where they can b enjoyed by all,cos` things like this can be easily over looked when they r given the wrong title like "general chit chat"

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Sophie7

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loved it

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tinkerwink

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Thanks guys, glad you liked it.Korb-thanks for the pointer.

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FluffybunnY

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Em Krob, this is the poems forum

krobelus

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Doh!

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