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Old 07-03-2008, 05:45 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Love Child

When her morals were low,
He should have told her no,
He should have told her to stop,
Should have moved her from the top,
She would call him,
He never heard her,
But it was on the inside,
He loved the slant of her eyes,
He's been a big mistake up until this date,
Their unwed encounter is not what caused this horrible fate,
He should have smiled instead of showing her signs of hate,
I wish she would have loved him as much as he loved her.
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Old 07-03-2008, 06:14 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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Old 07-03-2008, 01:52 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Heartbreaking indeed! But your poems are so wonderful, whether they be happy or sad!
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Old 07-03-2008, 04:22 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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that was great wahwah
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Old 07-03-2008, 08:36 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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very nice hun, keep up the good work
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