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Old 12-11-2006, 09:08 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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i want a xmas

It's xmas again, i missed the last
but iv'e heard the words of xmas past
but no blazing fire,no xmas tree
has eveyone out there forgotten me
we got twigs for a tree but we have no star
and i see my friend playing with a toy rusty blue car
no dolls to play with, i feel so sad
i ask you 'please tell me' have i been that bad
i would love a dolls house with lights and a bed
a shiny front door and the roof painted red
i stare through frosty windows with tears in my eyes
longing for the taste of my granny's mince pies
it's not my fault i'm an orphan girl
left by my folk 'their lives in a whirl'
a knock on the door is that some one for me
but no its a nanny with a cold cup of tea
won't some one adopt me and ease my pain
and let me enjoy a xmas again
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Old 12-11-2006, 11:06 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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GOOD JOB SAMMMMMMMM send us another
 
Old 12-11-2006, 11:36 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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more more!!!!!sam write more!!!
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Old 12-11-2006, 02:18 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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wicked...nice 1 sam!!!
 
Old 12-11-2006, 06:28 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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good one sam keep them coming
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very good sam
 
Old 12-13-2006, 12:16 AM     #7 (permalink)
 
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really good poem sam, i like it very much good job.
 
Old 12-13-2006, 04:50 AM     #8 (permalink)
 
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nice i liked that one
 
Old 12-13-2006, 07:59 AM     #9 (permalink)
 
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I'll adopt you sammy
 
Old 12-13-2006, 12:35 PM     #10 (permalink)
 
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sammy, u make us think of those less fortunate and that is a wonderful thing, keep up the good work.
 
 
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