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Old 06-17-2008, 12:54 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Her Love

She said I have to turn out better than she did,
I might be just as cursed as her,
My mind running like cheetahs,
Can sense the hate on the inside,
There is nothing but love in her yell,
Wanting us to do better for ourselves,
I'm sorry for the disappointment I've causeed,
And the sadness I've made,
I love her for the support and care,
She gives through the days,
I'm thankful for my mother,
And her lovely ways
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Old 06-17-2008, 12:57 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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how sweet hon
I'd say you were not cursed but blessed instead
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Old 06-17-2008, 01:00 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Old 06-17-2008, 09:30 AM     #4 (permalink)
 
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A good Mom who really cares can always be driven to yell at her kids out of love. I know mine has. Good job.
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Old 06-17-2008, 10:31 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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I'm sure your mother loves you, with all her heart, and she's very proud of you! Great poem yet again!
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