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Old 03-31-2008, 02:24 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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first love

im taking the religion or religions taking me
but thers only this one thing that sets me free
listenin to my music the escape that keeps me sane
with an overload in bass line that goes straight to my brain
i turn up the volume till its crystal clear an loud
my body starts to tingle jus by listenin to the sound
nothin else can do the same it hits the spot so fast
music is my first love it will always be my last

cant explain the freedom an the feeling from the bass
sumthing just comes over me wich nothing can replace
i tune in an i close my eyes living in a dream
hypnotised by somthing iv herd but never seen
this mystery of music is magic i can tell
the beats the bass the melody jus cought me in a spell
nothin else can do the same it hits the spot so fast
music is my first love it will always be my last
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Old 03-31-2008, 02:36 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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nice poem hon, well done
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Old 03-31-2008, 05:26 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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oh wow baby. i love it!!
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Old 03-31-2008, 06:49 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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wow, really great poem oggy!
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great poem hun!
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loved it think my first loves were puppies and kittens
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Old 04-05-2008, 03:15 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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OggyLove that's an aswesome poem!
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Old 04-05-2008, 05:48 PM     #8 (permalink)
 
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Oggy Has A Poetic Side I See
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Old 04-09-2008, 02:36 AM     #9 (permalink)
 
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Nice Oggy, I feel the same way about music!
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Old 04-10-2008, 04:28 PM     #10 (permalink)
 
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Good poem there bud!! It put me in thought when i was reading it..
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