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Old 06-23-2008, 08:47 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Father

Father You made me,
You made me perfectly,
In your resemblance and image,
You too are perfect like us all,
Why are you so jealous,
you can even control you're jealousy,
I won't let you control me,
I'll control my self,
You helped me see to love everything,
but nothing too much,
Even you,
I have to live freely,
I'm free since I can control myself,
I'll still love, not hate, my brothers and sisters,
And what you've made them love and accept,
You're perfect cause you can control yourself,
You are so loving,
I can't fear what I want to love as much as goodly possible,
I cant' be completely free if I'm fearful of anything even you,
I'll try and love everything equally,
As long as it does not cause permanent harm to what is loved,
I have to live on my own and be free,
I thank you for the guidance towards love,
I can learn and love on my own now,
I will still love and control this love for you and my brothers and everything here ,
If this whole gigantic family did this we could all live together freely,
with only self control
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Old 06-23-2008, 09:54 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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So beautiful!
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Old 06-23-2008, 11:15 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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thank you for sharing these with us all
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