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Old 03-29-2008, 01:52 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Location: dying alone
dying without you
i live away from the one i long for
always away always alone
i hear your voice but dont see the mouth which speaks
but yet i feel your touch at night when i sleep
but not only your touch is all i want but your warmth as well
call me greedy call me a lie but im here
with my heart open wide
cut it feel it kill it watch it bleed i dont care
so long as you still are with me bye my side
without you i cant see but with you i dont need to
i cant breathe without you but i suffocate when im near you
are you my cure or only my curse
or am i just blind
you always linger in my mind
your scent your voice your beauty
am i enough to linger in yours
or...
am i too small too weak too stupid
i love only what i envy
but love is painful
with my wants my needs
i suffer because of love
but i endure
i live through
i take my curse with a grain of salt
because your needs are all i care for
all i seek to help
not my own health not my own well being
i gave up my life so could live for you
and our brothers and sisters
we walked together but now i feel alone
where are you
where am i
i cant breathe here
i cant see here
i cant leave here
please come and save me now
im hurting without you im suffering without you
im dying without you
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Old 03-29-2008, 10:10 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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good poem, so sad
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Old 03-31-2008, 09:39 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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that is a very touching poem, good job
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Old 05-02-2008, 11:08 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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Thats a very deep, and moving poem!! Great job!!
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Old 05-03-2008, 11:32 AM     #5 (permalink)
 
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thats a really great poem hun
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Old 05-03-2008, 12:45 PM     #6 (permalink)
 
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nice work
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Old 06-06-2008, 04:22 PM     #7 (permalink)
 
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wow hun i never knew you could write like that keep it up
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Old 06-12-2008, 11:05 AM     #8 (permalink)
 
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Good poem
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Old 06-12-2008, 03:32 PM     #9 (permalink)
 
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Good poem Kotaro!
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Old 06-12-2008, 05:47 PM     #10 (permalink)
 
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Damn man. Sorry for the pain. It's too bad that people don't love for no reason and hate for no reason. You're love for this person resembles some peoples love for god. People aren't thought to love Love. It's much easier to put someone's love aside than to accept it and return. We just all need to love then love would be acceptable to all. Great poem.
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