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Do i make you think?
Old 05-27-2008, 01:54 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Do i make you think?

Do i make you think about your life?
Do you ever want a change?
Is there truth in what i say?
Can you see yourself in me?

My whole life is pouring out
I share my dreams, my fears
You must know me more now?
What do you think makes me tick?
You must tell yourself, i'm no one

But you never know, who i can be
Love controls my every thought,
my every word
My heart is full of endless love
You cannot stop it now

I bring out my love, and fill your heart
No, i will never stop
There are so many that are in need
Today is my everything
I'm here to heal your heart always
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Old 05-30-2008, 02:50 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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do you write it youself? lovely!!!!!!!
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Old 05-30-2008, 07:57 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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yes that was beautiful .......makes you stop and think ......very good
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Old 06-01-2008, 11:08 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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It's nice to see that you write with love.
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Old 06-02-2008, 04:08 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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that was sooo good
very well done, as always
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