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chasing a dream!!!
Old 11-30-2006, 11:13 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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chasing a dream!!!

for all my love did it seem
that i was just chasing a dream
the smile on her face
to the smell off her hair
thats when i noticed,that life wasnt fair

i wanted to hold you,nice and tight
thats the moments i knew i was right
for my love for you is tender and true
thats when i noticed i couldnt have you

the aches in my head just going around
for my true love, that i have found,
wishing and hoping that she fealt the same.

too the one that i wish i had
now i know im forever sad,the face i see
but cannot touch,
for now my love's just way too much.

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"life is a pack of cards,we can only play the hand that were dealt"

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Old 11-30-2006, 11:26 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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Another good poem tykes keep em coming!!!!
 
Old 12-01-2006, 08:01 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Very nice, tykes...



 
Old 12-01-2006, 12:38 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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OH Yes! very good.
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Old 12-01-2006, 08:16 PM     #5 (permalink)
 
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ur such a hopeless romantic lol
 
Old 12-02-2006, 02:34 AM     #6 (permalink)
 
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keep'em comin
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Old 12-03-2006, 06:21 AM     #7 (permalink)
 
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VERY GOOD POEM TYKES, YOU GOT SOME GOOD ONES, KEEP IT UP!!!
 
Old 12-03-2006, 08:16 AM     #8 (permalink)
 
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