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CAN YOU FORGIVE ME
Old 09-12-2007, 06:58 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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CAN YOU FORGIVE ME

CAN YOU FORGIVE ME


All this time I’ve wasted wondering,
That if I apologized to you would you forgive me?
If I told you I’d be there when you needed me to be,
Would you believe what I’ve told you?
I can’t take back all the wrong things that I’ve done,
The only thing I have to offer is my apology.
So much pain I have caused to you,
Can you find a place deep inside to forgive me.
Even though time has passed since I’ve last seen you,
I don’t know if we’re still where we were when I left.
With this time on my hands that I’ve got,
I have done nothing but think of the things that went wrong.
All this time I’ve wasted wondering,
That if I apologized to you would you forgive me?
If I told you I’d be there when you needed me to be,
Would you believe what I’ve told you?
After all that we’ve been through,
I still feel that I don’t deserve your forgiveness.
But still that is what I ask from you,
Filled with regrets for everything and knowing I still care for you.
How can someone like me ever change,
I tell you it is the people we choose to surround ourselves with.
I’m letting you know that you are who I choose to be around,
You are the people who have seen me through my darkest hours.
All this time I’ve wasted wondering,
That if I apologized to you would you forgive me?
If I told you I’d be there when you needed me to be,
Would you believe what I’ve told you?
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Old 09-16-2007, 03:04 AM     #2 (permalink)
 
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I WONDER WHERE DOES ALL THESE BEAUTIFUL WORDS COME FROM ?
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Old 09-23-2007, 10:52 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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wow another great one losty u r such a great writer muah
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Old 09-24-2007, 10:59 AM     #4 (permalink)
 
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Wow lost another wonderful and beautiful poem!
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