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The Breakthrough
Old 06-08-2006, 01:34 PM     #1 (permalink)
 
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The Breakthrough

time goes by fast or slow time goes up or down
your time to end you'll never know when it comes around
day by day, night by night, until it's time to take that flight
you go to sleep prepared to wake, never knowing when it's your life he's about to take
just b/c you're here one day doesn't mean tthere's a tomorrow, be thankful for the present and let the future flow
i know it's hurting so bad to lose people that we love
we must use those examples and try to straighten up
you must live everuday like it's your last one b/c one minute your here, and the next minute you're gone
yes it seems like we cant go on, but we gotta be soliders don't cry and stay strong
eventhough we all go through thangs, the thangs we go through we wish we could change
from you to me, me to you.
this is the life you gotta breakthrough
 
Old 06-08-2006, 01:38 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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Thats beautiful boo! Keep writing!
 
Old 06-08-2006, 08:10 PM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Very amazing and true to life I am impressed woohoo
 
Old 06-08-2006, 11:15 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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very good!
 
 

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