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Across the room
Old 09-23-2008, 03:47 AM     #1 (permalink)
 
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Across the room

You saw me from across the room
The eyes of your heart sought me
I stood bare, naked inside
You made yourself known to me
I feared deep inside
You drew me in
How exposed I felt
My guard dropped as you assured me your love would hold firm
No ring on my finger but a promise i bore
I held firm to our love no matter what blew our way
Life got crazy and I had no choice
No way to voice
I returned and you'd turned
My heart fell to the floor
Lost and bewildered
All those fears now confirmed
No matter what where or why
my love would have stood by your side through the test of time
I feel so lost now shattered and torn
That promise I wanted it kept, to see through to the end
Now I sit broken across the room
My silence inside screams pain of loss
I knew that love, it had beauty deep within
You made me feel so secure so loved
You crowned my heart security adorned
Now rejected it pains me
Always and ever became whatever
whatever resounds within my inner soul
as it was stripped from me my heart my soul my life
If I could wish it all back what good would that do
You know how it is, I sense it inside
I sit across the room and keep this pain within
Time has passed and yet my love never ends
Tears drip daily in memory of us
echo silently through eternal distances
both before and beyond
I pray always for you great things
Never will these prayers cease, they are yours alone
For you.
I hold my tongue, and silence my voice
As I sit here across the room

This candle resembles more than the naked eye can see
The hands behold more than a natural substance
This candle burns eternally...always and ever
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Old 09-23-2008, 01:34 PM     #2 (permalink)
 
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It's sad but so sweet,and beautiful!
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Old 10-03-2008, 12:47 AM     #3 (permalink)
 
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Wooooooow.....
Uneek, it is great! I really luv it!!!
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Old 10-04-2008, 08:59 PM     #4 (permalink)
 
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so heartfelt
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